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Blood & Soul Back of the Book Story Description

So you’re clicking through the books on Amazon or reading the back of a book in a bookstore and you read this story description:

A powerful spell banished demons to the Underworld ages ago. Now they gather seething for slaughter beneath an ancient portal. Prophesy says that sacrificing the king of the Midvast on a day shrouded in mystery will free Quuma’s demonic horde. Erupting from the portal their shades will become flesh, unleashed to quench their lust for human suffering and death. The reek of ruin will cover the land as it did before the spell.

Ledarrin is the bastard prince of the Midvast living in the shadows of a revered dynasty. In spite of his lineage, he’s the favored son of the king. Mathagel, the pureblood son, usurps the throne in fear of losing his birthright. He throws Ledarrin into a dungeon to be executed soon for crimes against the realm. Ledarrin escapes amid clashing factions. The survival of the realm seems lost.

Pursued by a legendary assassin Ledarrin begins a heart-pounding adventure across formidable wilderness into a deadly future he has yet to understand; a journey marked by lost love, seduction, betrayal and battle leading him to discover the challenges of his true identity. He’s quest is joined by aging warriors, unlikely allies and a heretic rumored to have knowledge of ancient scrolls, the Creed of Kings, that will thwart Quuma’s plans. It will change everything he has ever believed about the gods and his future. To save his father and the future of the realm, he must forge a new path free from the shadows of a dynasty, into light, away from his blood and into his soul.

Help me! I tried to keep it simple. That’s about the 10th draft! Boiling down a 166K word epic into 259 words is challenging. But does this zing?

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